Summer
breeze and shedded leaves,
I
saw her dancing in the mist,
An
impaired doll by her side,
But
yet she seems so lonely from my sight.
A
bond that crosses decades,
Perhaps
I have seen her somewhere,
In
my dreams of dressing a child,
Or
could she be the angel that I’ve lost?
I held his arm tightly
Pointing to the girl in that printed gown,
My
eyes makes a silent plead,
And
a tear rolls down when he nods with a yes!
While
she sat quietly along the porch,
Playing with bubbles in the air,
I’ve
already lived half my life,
Walking
by her side, down the aisle.
Papers
signed and she’s ours
They
said I’ve done her some charity
Perhaps they are too blind to see
Indeed I owe her my whole life
And
now…
I
have a house, she’ll make it a home
I
have a garden, she’ll plant roses
I
have money, she’ll give me happiness
I am
a woman and she’ll make me a mother
Now tell me,who gave life to who...
Now tell me,who gave life to who...
P.S: It's just amazing how God make plans,uniting two people who need each other so much.A dedication to all mothers who had been adopted by their angels..
I cannot tell you how adorable I think this post is. <3 **Summer breeze and shedded leaves,
ReplyDeleteI saw her dancing in the mist,
An impaired doll by her side,
Aww, my favourite lines. <3 You're amazing.
awww..thank you honey :*
DeleteYou are more amazing than me :)
more than anything i appreciate the choice of topic....
ReplyDeletegood job..
Thank u very much sumukh
DeleteThat was really sweet :) There is that other side to adoption that I don't think many people see.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mark :)
DeleteA beautiful way to start and topic we all need to talk about more. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteYes something that we all need to talk..and yes thank you :)
DeleteYour two last lines are very beautiful - so many emotions in this poem, so many powerful images.
ReplyDeleteThank u Marie..My pleasure to have u here
DeleteThese lines have to be the loveliest lines i have read! EVER.!Sucha beautiful thought! I am in awe!
ReplyDeleteThank u dear..Ur words made my day
DeleteOh god oh god this was amazingly beautiful.
ReplyDeleteStunning stunning. Damn, I cant stop reading it!
Thank you Soumya for being such a sweetheart :)
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ReplyDeleteit's Beautiful... :)
ReplyDelete@Sandy...........
Thank u sandy
Deletehow was the wedding?
ReplyDeleteand i agree with crystal
the 1st verse is so amazing
and you are my janeman my adorable awesome janeman :D
and yes to all the mothers who struggled to give their dolls the bright sunny smile :)
Thank you honey..the wedding went well :D
Deleteand yes you are my adorable janeman too
Cheers
Ah - that is such a fantastic way to look at it :)
ReplyDeleteThank You raajii..nice to see u here
DeleteNice :)
ReplyDeleteAlso, what a beautiful way of looking at it.
Thank U purpleMist
Deletewow..this is beautiful:)
ReplyDeleteThank U Aish
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