Sunday, December 4, 2011

He’s here tonight...


On a starry Monday night,
I whispered your name,
Silently but it feels loud,
The stars start to sulk,
As soon as they hear you,
The moon faces its back,
As the curtains closed too early,
Nightingale saves its song,
For another day,
Fireflies gave me a wink
As they understood,
Loneliness packs its bag,
Vacation over,
Darkness sneaks out
To let love shines,
Sadness vaporizes
As the room fits only two
I bid a short farewell,
Goodnight my friends,
I have my lover tonight....




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32 comments:

  1. ZebaDecember 4, 2011 at 8:06 AM

    Life surely is beautiful. And so are your words.

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  2. --December 4, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    This is so beautiful! I've read it thrice now and the image is perfect :)

    "Fireflies gave me a wink
    As they understood"

    Very creative and beautiful! :)

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  4. AnonymousDecember 4, 2011 at 2:20 PM

    The stars start to sulk,
    As soon as they hear you,
    The moon faces its back,
    As the curtains closed too early,

    Dang.... i had to re-read the whole poem a few times and imagine the scene again and again. I wanna make a scene on this. Soldier returning from border to his wife after a long wait. Wow you are truly talented. lol can we cast aishwarya for the bride and me as the solider ;-)

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  5. AnonymousDecember 4, 2011 at 2:21 PM

    i mean i want to picture this poem on a soldier returning to his wife after a long period of time.

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  6. Aquib MastanDecember 4, 2011 at 3:04 PM

    lovely!

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  7. AnonymousDecember 4, 2011 at 3:31 PM

    This is my humble tribute to your awesome poem.. Think this as a prequel to this romantic poem. he he. http://rajaalifx.blogspot.com/2011/12/he-is-coming-home.html

    im hoping im not offending you.

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  8. suvaibaDecember 4, 2011 at 5:12 PM

    my janeman writes so awesomely and the poem is just khoobsoorat/sundar.
    you took my heart away. and the last line is perfect.
    <3 lotsa love and love and love .
    smiles and hugs

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  9. RichaDecember 4, 2011 at 5:44 PM

    sweetness :)

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  10. AnuranjaniDecember 4, 2011 at 6:43 PM

    How do you write so wonderfully!?
    This is so, so beautiful! <3

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  11. sneha December 4, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    goodbye, but tell me about it later:):)

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  12. Writing BeeDecember 4, 2011 at 9:59 PM

    Fell in love with the last line.. Lovely!!

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  13. ateeq mughalDecember 5, 2011 at 1:15 AM

    yeah i am here tonight :P
    that was really a hot poem :D
    and your play list is fantastic,
    that perfect two by auburn is my all time favorite song :D

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  14. SoumyaDecember 5, 2011 at 3:21 AM

    This was mindblowingly beautiful! You're incredibly lucky and you derseve to be.

    God bless :)

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  15. PeachesDecember 5, 2011 at 7:36 AM

    No kidding, this is beautiful. I love it.

    "Sadness vaporizes."

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  16. AishwaryaDecember 5, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    Nice poem..It seems like a lover is returning to his princess, after a long time. And the wait finally ends.

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  17. the other side of meDecember 5, 2011 at 5:19 PM

    @Zeba
    That's so sweet of you :) and yes Life is Beautiful :)

    @~*Princesa Fiona*~
    Hey thanks I'm happy that you liked it..

    @Abrar!
    Hey thanks a bunch for writing that story..feel honored..and the scene was just perfect :) and about aishwarya part..I really hope abhishek wont mind :P I read your story and commented too..thanks for your words abrar..
    P.S:Go ahead with the scene..:D

    @Aquib
    Thanks :)

    @Suvaiba
    I took your heart away..wow..im glad i did that ;) now your heart is safe with me..thank baby for the words..lots of love and good luck for the test..:D

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  18. the other side of meDecember 5, 2011 at 5:32 PM

    @Richa
    Thanks :)

    @Anuranjani
    hahah..well,I dont know..:P someone inspired me I guess ;)Thanks baby..
    Cheers

    @sneha
    okay..will surely tell you about that ;)

    @Writing bee
    Im glad that you loved it..thanks :D

    @ateeq
    aww..yes you were here ;) How's you?I'm so happy to see you here after long time :D haha..yes it is a HOT poem ;) Perfect two is my all time fav too ..thanks ateeq..
    cheers!!

    @Soumya
    Thank you Soumya..thats so sweet of you.You are lucky too honey and yes you deserve to be one too:)
    Stay blessed

    @Peaches
    Aww..thanks love :D..let the sadness vaporize :)

    @Aish
    yes love you said it well..thanks a lot :)

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  19. CяystalDecember 5, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    **Loneliness packs its bag!
    I wish it did that all the freaking time. That would be perfect, yes! :)
    There isn't any doubt and I don't have to develop second thoughts before saying this is AWESOME. Wakes up the romantic in all of us.

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  20. MenacheryDecember 5, 2011 at 7:47 PM

    Fireflies gave me the wink as they understood ... awwww ...
    this is def one romantic poem, makes me want to sigh ...not cz of the poem, but cz of the memories it brings :) ...

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  21. Beyond HorizonDecember 5, 2011 at 10:55 PM

    Short of words, my dumb head :)

    Night, moon, stars, fire flies, lovers...magical ;)

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  22. Dr. MohamedDecember 6, 2011 at 6:38 AM

    I especially like the last two lines. This poem feels good.

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  23. AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 7:28 AM

    @theotherside, you are welcome madam. Ur poem was soo heart toughing that i got inspired instantly. when u r free try to read this story (i must warn u its fucked up though but real life event)

    "http://rajaalifx.blogspot.com/2011/11/too-good-to-be-true-doubt_14.html

    this event inspired me to start imagining and writing stories. i want to reach the level of my idol and see how far i can succeed as a story teller ;-)

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  24. Ph_December 6, 2011 at 12:17 PM

    I love it!! Perfect :)

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  25. FatimaDecember 6, 2011 at 8:58 PM

    This is beautiful, rhymes also well leaving a smile the end and the pic awesome :)

    Take Care

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  26. AnonymousDecember 7, 2011 at 3:29 AM

    Preciosas palabras, preciosas imágenes.

    Un saludo cordial,
    Db.

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  27. shash.destroyer@gmail.comDecember 7, 2011 at 4:45 AM

    touching words and a wonderful pic

    stay blessed ^_^

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  28. the other side of meDecember 7, 2011 at 8:44 AM

    @Crystal
    Thanks baby for the AWESOME word:)owh how I wish they pack their bags and never come back..but they'll always come back ..wakes up the romantic in us..that's sounds cool :)

    @Menachery
    Hey thanks :) memories oh yes..it wakes up mine too :)

    @Beyond Horizon
    They are add magical touch to my words,I love to make them alive :) thanks a lot sweetheart:)

    @Mughal
    Thank you...I felt good after penning it down :)

    @Abrar!
    will check it out soon :)

    @Ph_
    hey thanks a lot! :)

    @Fatima
    Thnaks a lot dear..Im glad that it makes you smile..pic courtesy by google :)

    @David B.Bustos
    Muchas gracias :)Imagen cortesía de Google :D

    @the guy in the mirror
    Hey you are here..thanks a lot
    you too stay blessed..hope to see you more around :)

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  29. AnonymousDecember 9, 2011 at 2:07 AM

    Beautifully written, the words are talking feelings and we can sense them.
    Stay well and continue to write, you are doing it so well.
    xoxo

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  30. the other side of meDecember 10, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    Marie,thank you so much..your words always make me smile :)I will
    XOXOXO

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  31. AnonymousDecember 11, 2011 at 2:44 AM

    By far i guess dis one's the best out of ur kitty.. there's so much of positivity in it :) ... i've got my final M.B.B.S exams coming up so i've been a lil held up..But i had to write di tday.. u're awesome u really are.. It's really sweet of u to remember me.. thot everyone's forgotten but i guess... that's not true.. people do remember.. and this gesture of urs made my day. :) Keep writing girl.. ur radiant.. pocket full of sunshine :) on a lighter note.. who's dis charmer who has swept u off ur feet ?? ;) tc

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  32. the other side of meDecember 11, 2011 at 3:31 PM

    Hey YOU ARE HERE..YAY..I feel really happy to see you here..Thanks for your words honey..Mbbs..well I got a future doctor here..ALL THE Best..im sure you'll go through it just fine :)yes yes how can i forget you.you are one of the bloggers that leave AWESOME comments on my blog..and you are damn sweet to take your time and drop by here..I will keep writing for sure..and I hope you come with a post soon..miss your writing dear

    really a charmer I would say ;)

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