Saturday, September 17, 2011

The world through my window pane


I sit by my window pane
On a lonely day
To watch the world pass by
 A thousand tales unfolds
Right in front of my eyes
She cries, and He hugs
She falls, and He catches
 I see hope on a faded face
 I see dreams of a young heart
I hear whispers, I hear songs of love
They walk, they dance and they smile
They hold hands, like it’s the end
Through my tiny window pane
I see a big world
A world too beautiful to ignore
Today, I left my window pane
To join the world at the other side
 A lonely day?
Nah, It’s no more!

P.S: Writing a poem after a long time!!!....acha laga aaj :D

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  1. Blasphemous AestheteSeptember 17, 2011 at 11:48 PM

    Lonely no more, just join the crowd, it's waiting for you. Indeed, the other side of the wall has company and warmth.

    Nice read,
    aur jo achha lage, wo karte raha keejiye :)


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  2. CookieCrumbsInc.September 18, 2011 at 12:56 AM

    You know how I never get to smile at the happiness in poems specifically? They always tend to be dark and abstract and gloomy.
    When it started out I was sure the observer was going to be unhappy that she's stuck at the window pane while the world passes her by.

    Which is why I love this poem. For it made me smile, a very wide one at that.

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  3. Viya ;)September 18, 2011 at 1:24 AM

    I loveee this line "A world too beautiful to ignore"... :) :)
    Very well written!! :D :D

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  4. monamourSeptember 18, 2011 at 7:17 AM

    i loved reading this!

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  5. shash.destroyer@gmail.comSeptember 18, 2011 at 7:41 AM

    interesting :D

    Stay blessed ^_^

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  6. Red HandedSeptember 18, 2011 at 12:15 PM

    If only we let go of our miseries and the thought that hold us back and actually live, we all would be happy souls.

    Simple yet captivating lines!
    Agar accha laga toh likhte raho. Hume bhi accha laga.

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  7. FirstTimeMotherSeptember 18, 2011 at 12:15 PM

    Wow !! such a sweet poem it is.. :)

    Join the other side of the window pane and feel the difference, you will forget the meaning of loneliness.

    Take care !!

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  8. CяystalSeptember 18, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    ** I see hope on a faded face
    I see dreams of a young heart
    I hear whispers, I hear songs of love

    I think those are preeetty lines :)
    And poetry after alot of days always feels amazing :D

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  9. Curl JungSeptember 18, 2011 at 3:08 PM

    Beautifully written!
    Parh kar bhut acha laga!

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  10. aakashSeptember 18, 2011 at 3:13 PM

    sabko acha lag raha hai :)
    kya khoob likha hai mohtarma TOSM ne
    Zindagi ki ek jhalak kabhi kabhi boht se ehsaas dikha deti hai....
    ^^^ Beat that :D

    aJ

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  11. Furree KattSeptember 18, 2011 at 4:18 PM

    lovely! ♥

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  12. fatimaSeptember 18, 2011 at 6:51 PM

    it is pyari =)

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  13. EzaziSeptember 18, 2011 at 8:31 PM

    Beauty. ♥

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  14. ateeq mughalSeptember 18, 2011 at 10:31 PM

    a lonely day,
    Nah its no more,
    after reading this :D

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  15. UnknownSeptember 18, 2011 at 10:43 PM

    Guess what, meko bhi boht acha laga ab to :P :)
    Sweet post :)

    Love, Risha :)

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  16. AyushiSeptember 18, 2011 at 10:53 PM

    Absolutely stunned I am :)

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  17. FatimaSeptember 19, 2011 at 1:05 AM

    Beautiful loved the simplicity of the poem and your words :)

    TC

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  18. Gazal BharadwajSeptember 19, 2011 at 3:36 PM

    beautiful.
    loved the pic and the close....

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  19. sneha September 19, 2011 at 4:19 PM

    aah i enjoyed d ending. b'ful

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  20. SoumyaSeptember 19, 2011 at 8:39 PM

    I so love poetry and this is one of the best ones I've read so far :)

    Love,
    Soumya

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  21. the other side of meSeptember 19, 2011 at 10:37 PM

    @Blasphemous
    Hey Thanks...yes indeed the other side of the world is much more beautiful than i've expected

    and now,I'll only do things that makes me feel acha :)

    @PeeVee
    hey u changed ur name :P Now you really made me smile, a very wide one at ur comment,thanks you made my day :D

    @Viya
    Thanks dear, I too love that line the most

    @NIO
    Thanks darling :D:D

    @shashank
    hey u have been flooding my inbox with ur comments..well thank you for reading all my previous post..
    You too stay blessed :)

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  22. the other side of meSeptember 19, 2011 at 11:00 PM

    @Red handed
    Hey Ms red,
    yes dear,and now I am a happy soul:D
    Thanks dear,im glad that you liked it :)
    Cheers

    @Reicha
    awww..thanks dear :D yes yes the differences is so huge...that is so sweet of you
    you too,take care :)

    @crystal
    thanks dear,poetry after a long time really makes me feel acha :)

    @hamza
    Thanks hamza,that is so sweet of you! take care

    @aakash
    Hey i do understand what you've written,million thanks to my wonderful fren who helped me to translate it..and thank you so much for the lovely comment,you make smile :)

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  23. the other side of meSeptember 19, 2011 at 11:08 PM

    @Furree Katt
    thanks dear <3

    @fatima
    thanks <3

    @ezazi
    Thanks <3

    @ateeq
    awww..im glad that its not a lonely day anymore.thanks:D

    @risha
    i know dat you'll liked that for sure *wink*..cheers and thanks :)

    @~Serendipity~
    oh dear, you make me stunned too..thanks :)

    @Fatima
    thanks dear..im in love with your words too :)

    @Gazal
    hey you gt a nice name :D welcome to my blog and thanks a lot for the comment

    @sneha
    awww..thanks <3

    @soumya
    awww..that makes me soooo happy dear,thanks for following and thanks a lot for ur lovely comment..*im smiling*

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  24. Usama RehmanSeptember 20, 2011 at 12:34 AM

    Awesome!!!
    I loved the part
    "I hear whispers, I hear songs of love
    They walk, they dance and they smile"
    I hope anyone who gets to the other side meets joy, and success though its hard but then thats wat Life is!!! ))

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  25. the other side of meSeptember 20, 2011 at 12:25 PM

    Usama

    hey thanks a lot...yes its so true,life is all bout going out there and makes urself happy instead of waiting for the happiness to come

    :):):)

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  26. shash.destroyer@gmail.comSeptember 20, 2011 at 7:59 PM

    @tosom
    Yeah, I love reading what people have to say. Sometimes they are even better than reading novels ;)

    Hope it didn't bring you any discomfort :)

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  27. the other side of meSeptember 20, 2011 at 8:01 PM

    hey hey not a problem :D

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  28. avecwingsSeptember 20, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    it touched my heart...
    superbly xpressed... :)

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  29. the other side of meSeptember 21, 2011 at 2:27 PM

    @avecwings
    Thanks dear <3

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  30. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2011 at 7:01 PM

    Happy you shared your poems with us - I love this one. It makes people from outside alive thought we don't know the, they take form through your words in front of our eyes.
    Very well done - would love to read more of your poems!
    Take care

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  31. the other side of meSeptember 23, 2011 at 5:45 PM

    Awwww..thanks a lot..i really appreciate ur comment..thanks for reading my poem

    Love
    Me

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  32. ASSeptember 24, 2011 at 12:40 AM

    hii

    lovely!

    padh ke hume bhi accha laga aaj :)

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  33. äмän ♥September 26, 2011 at 4:37 PM

    this is Awesome :)
    Boht hi allaaaaa <3

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  34. Center ShockerSeptember 27, 2011 at 9:57 AM

    wow noce this is!!

    http://achu89.blogspot.com/

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  35. KalyanSeptember 29, 2011 at 1:37 AM

    nicely crafted lines...lovely words!

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  36. the other side of meSeptember 30, 2011 at 8:17 PM

    @aman
    thanks dear..love u

    @center shocker
    hey..thanks a lot

    @kalyan
    thank u sooo much :):)

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  37. Inspector SaahabDecember 9, 2011 at 11:34 PM

    beautifully penned. great come back to poetry after so long. more poems please.

    yes the world out the is too beautiful to be ignored. be part of it :)

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  38. the other side of meDecember 10, 2011 at 12:07 AM

    yes yes more poems coming soon :D

    stay tuned

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  39. LocomenteDecember 20, 2013 at 3:55 PM

    Padke bhi acha laga!

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